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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Tue, Oct 14 2014, 19:01 PM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Tue, Oct 14 2014, 19:04 PM |
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There will be a few more to come these are still very much WIPs
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Lord-Jyssev
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Posted: Wed, Oct 15 2014, 6:16 AM |
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I don't know if you're welcoming comments, but I find these pretty interesting. I absolutely love the bottom left corner of the second one. There's something so gestural about the cloak spilling onto the ground that's really cool. The rim lighting you have on her torso is super great. I'm interested to see where these go when you fully develop them.
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Polris
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Posted: Wed, Oct 15 2014, 8:45 AM |
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Really like the sky in the first one and for some reason I also think the figure drawing underneath the paint is really cool
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Wed, Oct 15 2014, 13:07 PM |
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Lord-Jyssev wrote: I don't know if you're welcoming comments, but I find these pretty interesting. I absolutely love the bottom left corner of the second one. There's something so gestural about the cloak spilling onto the ground that's really cool. The rim lighting you have on her torso is super great. I'm interested to see where these go when you fully develop them. Comments and critique is welcomed. These are still very much WIPs and I can even display the under drawings if you would like but I feel for the perspective one all the line might confuse folks. I am doing a project for school and am doing a narrative- I will need to do five pieces total. I've decided to do art that ' documents' Tempo's new life on Amia. I think of of the next few images will be the war, on the fornt lines. Polris wrote: Really like the sky in the first one and for some reason I also think the figure drawing underneath the paint is really cool Thanks!
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Lord-Jyssev
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Posted: Wed, Oct 15 2014, 19:57 PM |
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My suggestion for the first one would be to add some strong, stark rim lighting. It makes sense considering the extremely bright back light.
EDIT: Also, the perspective might be interesting to see on the docks one. It appears that you have the horizon in the middle of that upper wall, but for the character it almost looks like the camera is at Tempo's eye level. I think that's what looks wonky to me, anyway.
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Krin
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Posted: Wed, Oct 15 2014, 20:01 PM |
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Joined: 05 Jan 2006 Location: California
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Righteous Anger
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Posted: Wed, Oct 15 2014, 20:04 PM |
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Joined: 04 Feb 2012 Location: South Carolina, USA
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You have very impressive talents, Passionate. I'm a little green with envy -- I wish I could create art with half as much ability as you've demonstrated, even in these two incomplete pieces.
I'm sure you'll have people knocking down your PM box soon wanting commissions for their characters!
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Wed, Oct 15 2014, 21:40 PM |
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Lord-Jyssev wrote: My suggestion for the first one would be to add some strong, stark rim lighting. It makes sense considering the extremely bright back light.
EDIT: Also, the perspective might be interesting to see on the docks one. It appears that you have the horizon in the middle of that upper wall, but for the character it almost looks like the camera is at Tempo's eye level. I think that's what looks wonky to me, anyway. I think I will be adding lots of lighting and halation (sp?) around the figures admittedly the horizon does not match the figure in the fairground however I will post an image displaying the perspective lines- a current big issue with the image is the boat and docs have no sence of weight right now.one more details are added the image As a whole will look much nicer-keep an eye out for update on this on you may see a PC or so you might recognize
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Wed, Oct 15 2014, 21:54 PM |
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Righteous Anger wrote: You have very impressive talents, Passionate. I'm a little green with envy -- I wish I could create art with half as much ability as you've demonstrated, even in these two incomplete pieces.
I'm sure you'll have people knocking down your PM box soon wanting commissions for their characters! Oh well if any one wants to commission me they can - i drew that one portrait for shade that's almost finished the horns just have to be fixed and the suit defined. And I'm sure that if you keep working you'll probably be better than me one day! Today I worked on the first image- Here's the close up- I'm not sure if I should keep the cartoony feel or go for a more naturalistic look. Click below to see a higher rez of the face. http://puu.sh/cdJ2G/37fa569f13.jpg
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Wed, Oct 15 2014, 22:02 PM |
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Lord-Jyssev wrote: My suggestion for the first one would be to add some strong, stark rim lighting. It makes sense considering the extremely bright back light.
EDIT: Also, the perspective might be interesting to see on the docks one. It appears that you have the horizon in the middle of that upper wall, but for the character it almost looks like the camera is at Tempo's eye level. I think that's what looks wonky to me, anyway. This may be a bit confusing to see at first but here's all my lines- the extension has been cut off a while to where the two vanishing pints were. Right now I'm working on setting that leg down correctly.
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Jes
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Posted: Wed, Oct 15 2014, 22:09 PM |
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Joined: 23 Aug 2006 Location: Camriiole
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I love two-point perspective. It looks really cool when done correctly. I can't wait to see how that one looks when you're done with it.
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Thu, Oct 16 2014, 11:36 AM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Mr. Hackums
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Posted: Thu, Oct 16 2014, 11:40 AM |
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Broldi
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Posted: Thu, Oct 16 2014, 11:41 AM |
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Don't know if PassionateShadow already posted this somewhere. But she doodled Shade, and it made me happy. In my pants.
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Polris
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Posted: Thu, Oct 16 2014, 14:32 PM |
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If that's a doodle I don't know what I'm doing. Cave art?
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Thu, Oct 16 2014, 14:59 PM |
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Broldi wrote: Don't know if PassionateShadow already posted this somewhere. But she doodled Shade, and it made me happy. In my pants.
He still needs his horns to be painted in correctly instead of the sketch that's still there. Hehe...
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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A Majestic Dwarf
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Posted: Thu, Oct 16 2014, 15:48 PM |
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Polris wrote: If that's a doodle I don't know what I'm doing. Cave art? If thats a doodle.... then I'm smearing feces on the wall apparently. Great looking art Though given that this is Amia... I can't help wondering what that mythical beast in the first picture is... strange...
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Karradon
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Posted: Fri, Oct 17 2014, 0:40 AM |
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Aurora wrote: Polris wrote: If that's a doodle I don't know what I'm doing. Cave art? If thats a doodle.... then I'm smearing feces on the wall apparently. Great looking art Though given that this is Amia... I can't help wondering what that mythical beast in the first picture is... strange... I think that's a ... H-o-r-s-e.... a very rare creature indeed. And your art is REALLY great, Tempo
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Mon, Oct 20 2014, 17:53 PM |
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The death of Kohaku... First Meeting Shade I'm having some trouble with the composition of the first one- any suggestions?
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Polris
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Posted: Mon, Oct 20 2014, 18:19 PM |
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The only thing that I'd change on the first one is reverse the arm positions on the dead guy/chick. Make the right arm hang loose. Just seems more natural to me but that's more of a personal preference than actually something that is off.
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SamTheGiantSlayer
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Posted: Mon, Oct 20 2014, 19:05 PM |
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Kristen, you're too amazing <3
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Wed, Oct 22 2014, 4:01 AM |
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I think this compositions looks way better
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Thu, Oct 23 2014, 13:12 PM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Polris
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Posted: Thu, Oct 23 2014, 21:50 PM |
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Very nice! And disregard my last post.. I thought the person carrying the dead person was facing towards the viewer Oh and by the way, have you ever tried texturing UV maps? Would you like to?
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Thu, Oct 23 2014, 22:02 PM |
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UC maps? I don't think I know what those are?
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Polris
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Posted: Thu, Oct 23 2014, 22:47 PM |
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A UV map is like a 2D representation of a 3D object. It's kinda hard to explain but it's really not that complicated. You already have all the shapes drawn out and you basically 'just' color them in. If you look at this image.. the UV map is the cross shape under the cube on the far right. That cross shape represents all the faces of the cube. Now, a little more complex UV would look like thisIt's the same concept it just looks more complicated than it actually is. I've colored certain areas on the UV map (on the right) and you can see to which parts of the model they correspond to. The yellow bit in the middle, with the black arrow on it, represents one half of the chest. The other half is mirrored to the other side of the chest because the UV maps for those face of the model are overlapping.The yellow part next to it, without the arrow, is half the back. I don't know how else to explain it... This is what a fully colored UV map would look like http://johnaraujo.net/cardkingdom/wp-co ... 00x300.jpgI hope that made more sense than I think it did
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Lord-Jyssev
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Posted: Thu, Oct 23 2014, 22:49 PM |
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Wed, Oct 29 2014, 19:50 PM |
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Oh silly silly I'm not really using 3d models here I'm just drawing a 2d image- though I could use textures for masking effects. http://puu.sh/cvj2Y/23b049a666.jpg^ new sketch
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Silent2001
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Posted: Wed, Oct 29 2014, 21:06 PM |
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Dis is awesome
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MadrikVale
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Posted: Sat, Nov 01 2014, 3:48 AM |
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Hah I was just shopping for concept artists.
Want to sketch Madrik and make some $$$?
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Mon, Nov 03 2014, 14:57 PM |
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MadrikVale wrote: Hah I was just shopping for concept artists.
Want to sketch Madrik and make some $$$? Sure! Shall I send you a form and other details?
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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MadrikVale
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Posted: Tue, Nov 04 2014, 0:37 AM |
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Thu, Nov 06 2014, 15:09 PM |
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PassionateShadow wrote: Lord-Jyssev wrote: My suggestion for the first one would be to add some strong, stark rim lighting. It makes sense considering the extremely bright back light.
EDIT: Also, the perspective might be interesting to see on the docks one. It appears that you have the horizon in the middle of that upper wall, but for the character it almost looks like the camera is at Tempo's eye level. I think that's what looks wonky to me, anyway. This may be a bit confusing to see at first but here's all my lines- the extension has been cut off a while to where the two vanishing pints were. Right now I'm working on setting that leg down correctly. Getting there slowly....
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Raua
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Posted: Sun, Nov 09 2014, 19:18 PM |
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This little devil drew Sparkles for me, and Its AWESOME, so yeah, y'all should get to see her talents too!
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Mon, Nov 10 2014, 15:14 PM |
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Commission of Grim / The Tarkuul Keeper thus far http://puu.sh/cHajT/f8d4cfd499.jpg
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Tue, Nov 25 2014, 15:49 PM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Fri, Dec 12 2014, 14:42 PM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Fri, Dec 12 2014, 14:45 PM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Fri, Dec 12 2014, 14:46 PM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Fri, Dec 12 2014, 14:51 PM |
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Nate and Tempo
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Fri, Dec 12 2014, 14:55 PM |
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Tempo is very small
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Polris
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Posted: Fri, Dec 12 2014, 15:29 PM |
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Arekkusu
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Posted: Tue, Dec 30 2014, 6:03 AM |
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I love your art!
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Thu, Jan 01 2015, 8:14 AM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Thu, Jan 01 2015, 8:20 AM |
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as finished as this ever will be
_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Thu, Jan 01 2015, 8:21 AM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Thu, Jan 01 2015, 8:28 AM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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Polris
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Posted: Thu, Jan 01 2015, 22:31 PM |
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I noticed those balls a few posts ago and thought they were great but seeing them up close now I'm just amazed at how good they look. The rope, the shiny bits, the shadows.. everything is great. Awesome job!
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PassionateShadow
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Posted: Tue, Jan 06 2015, 2:11 AM |
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_________________ ❤ Amia is Fun Again! ❤ #GreenisNotACreativeColour"It's easy to feel like a hero. It's a little harder to be one."
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